In search of true love you took after
enticing shadows fastened to the night.
You then, fell into a pit of melancholy
dragged into dimness, where there was no light.
Appealing grins drew you into the darkness
where all the illusion was gradually stripped away.
Your, innocence, was stolen by the ones
who selected you to play, the games they play.
Your delicate heart was effortlessly broken,
then shattered into a thousand array.
Also, your torment was torpefied by drugs and liquor
under whose tutelage you thought your heart will mend, quicker.
You never believed this could occur, yet it has, and opened all those old wounds .
I warned you before, but you won’t ever listen to my honest sounds…
So beautiful, its sadness touched my heart. And, you know, there’s hope and healing somewhere along this path. Be blessed with love! 🙏❤️
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Thank you so much Claudia 😄
You’re so right…
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Expressed so heartily. Beautiful post Abhishek!
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Thanks a lot Himanshi☺
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Love this! Resonates very much so
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Thanks a lot brother 😇
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Love always fam 🙏🏽
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Expressed to touch the bottom of heart..
👌👌👌Be blessed!!
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Thank you so much Supriya Mishra😀
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Welcome Abhishek..
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Wonderful post Abhishek!!
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Thank you!
Have a peaceful day😄
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Same to you dear 😊
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This is a beautiful write-up! And your vocabulary is on point👌
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Thank you Nameera 😄
Have a great day!
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Fantabulous one!
Good Morning. Have a good day.😃
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Thanks a ton😄
You too have a fabulous day…
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Oh God, this is so painful. I am deeply touched. So many innocents fall into such traps, it’s saddening. Btw, the rhymes were soooo perfect, I recited the poem aloud to myself and it felt very musical. 😄 And this one line, “enticing shadows fastened to the night.” I always get mesmerized by your use of phrases and imagery. I’d definitely like to get some lessons. You’re just too good. ☺
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Thank you, Chandni! Your kind comments are most kind; and very much appreciated! 🙂
Your appreciation is like an exotic bouquet for me😊
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And even your comments are a work of art. “Exotic Bouquet”, huh. That is exactly what I want to learn to do. Beautiful comment, I’d say. 😹
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Arey re!
You’re like an angel of lights when it comes to writing comments of appreciation. I’m learning from you and there’s so much to learn.
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And you are Mr Angel when writing magical poems. ❤ Samepinch for everything, huh. And no good words for the next few weeks now. 😼 It’s like having too much chocolate or Maggi. If you have a lot of it, it’s unbearable the next time. 😹
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Yeah yeah 😁😁😁
Check out a horror poem that I just re -published
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Hehe, yes. I saw the photo, it’s scary. 😬 Let me see kya likha hai.
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