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Up I went hiking among the soul of clouds
Hoping to catch the sun seeds in my palm
As petals sing a lullaby it gets so real and
I cast my heart into the stream of its melody
The brook is cutting through the boulder
with every single precious beat
set sail the worries on a willow
as meadow fairies hoist the breeze
In silent conversations with the heavens
relaxing on a log thatโs been expertly hewn
I can hear the patchy sounds of the horn
ushered by a gentle zephyr
Time to descend and collide with obligations
The plastic smiles replacing imposing nature
Walking around, with the fake crowd,
As if pretending to be alive!
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Beautiful Bhai โค๏ธ
Loved ur words !!
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Thanks for appreciating it bro ๐
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My pleasure ๐
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Speechless I am! ๐ป๐ป
The last stanza is so real, returning from nature to this fake world doesn’t feel right. ๐ผ I wish we could stay amidst the trees foreverrrr.
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Yes! Wish we can live there forever, but again there are obligations and you’ll have to come to reality to earn a living ๐
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True. ๐ฟ
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Give me tea. ๐ฟ
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Now I feel better and ready to be stupid againnn. ๐พ๐บ
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Beautifully written Abhishek
And last stanza is so appropriate and relatable
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Thanks for reading and supporting Sohanpreet ๐๐ธ
We must strike a balance between things
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My pleasure ๐
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Just fell in love with the last stanza. It was so beautiful that I kept re-reading it. ๐
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Thanks for your kind read, Sonali ๐๐ธ
I’m grateful that you loved it
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You wrote this with such love that anyone will fall in love with this poem ๐
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That’s so sweet of you ๐
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So nicely written – a serene abode – away from ostensible society
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Thank you so much for adding a valuable comment ๐
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My absolute pleasure
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Beautifully crafted words !!
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Thank you so much ๐
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Very beautiful imagery. And the last lines are so true ๐
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Yes! Those last lines are striking a chord with everyone๐
Really glad that you loved this one
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Natural for everyone to feel them for you have written so perfectly ๐
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Oh my godd…… u did??? Congo yaar! Even I have a dream if doing this… wish I could some day.
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Yes, Sunaina! It’ll be fun I’m sure๐
Thanks for reading
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Yeah..I hope to do it , at least once … ๐ ๐
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Beautiful lines and beautiful photo! Thank you for sharing them!
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Thanks for reading ๐ธ๐
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So well written ๐๐
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Thank you so much ๐
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Pleasure is mine ๐
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‘Time to descend and collide with obligations
The plastic smiles replacing imposing nature
Walking around, with the fake crowd,
As if pretending to be alive!”
How apt, Those lines took my heart ๐๐
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๐ธ Thanks for all the appreciating words. You took time to go through my blog ๐ I’m really happy.
btw i loved your blog’s classy feel with those custom emos and perfect words๐ค
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pleasure is all mine ;D
Ohh wow Abhi, I can see that cool bitmoji ๐
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hey๐๐ I’m loving this… so cool
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welcome bud!! ๐
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This is such a glorious poem!
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That’s such a sweet comment โค๏ธ
Thanks, Emily!
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Awesome.. ๐๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ
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