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Midweek blues

Mind on a spin
with storms within

drops of tears
trying to find a path
to the lips

unanchored thoughts
adrift in the head

falling harder
than the gravity’s pull

mind’s on a spin
but body’s sober
like this day

There’s too much on my mind,
But there’s not enough time,
To write it all down,
So I guess I’ll just drown,
In these thoughts.


This blog is managed by Abhishek Pathania -A computer science student, who writes short poems on genres ranging from horror, mystery, drama, romance, satire, and fiction. Occasionally you'll find motivational quotes and hand-curated articles on a variety of topics, all capable of shaping conscious awareness.

26 thoughts on “Midweek blues

  1. Loved how you carved those unsettling thoughts into such a beautiful verse. 😼 Unanchored thoughts wala metaphor is so original and interesting. 😃 Also, the gif you used is giving me the illusion of drowning in a pool. Goes perfectly with the theme of the poem. 👊

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  2. Ah… though beautifully turbulent, I can certainly very strongly relate to the feelings in this poem… so here, I can quite happily drown, in this shared poetic moment.

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