Hey, guys! How are you doing today? I hope you are doing fine and that heat outside is not beating you up. Well, drink a lot of water to stay cool and healthy. Happy Summers!
So, recently I tried writing few poems and thought it would be great to share them with you. Please do share your views and feedbacks in the comment section.
Summer
Crystal rain drop
caught in the
cumulus clouds
lilies blooming
A brown butterfly
pecking in a rice field
ever deepening colors ―
of the owl’s eyes
summer heat
sunlight escaping
in the frozen puddle
curled up together
in the crimson red sky
Friend
Hey friend
When the rain starts to pour
If the sky… above you turns dark
And that old north wind begins to blow
Keep your head together and call my name
Soon I’ll be knocking upon your door
I know you are cold
But don’t you shiver
Shout out my name
I’ll always be waiting for you
I’ll be there by your side
You’re my end and my beginning
You’re my downfall, you’re my muse
You light up my world
So whenever you are down,
Call out my name
Promise me
If the sky that we look upon
Should tumble and fall
Or the mountain should crumble to the sea
You won’t cry, You won’t cry
cause’ I’ll be there for you,
in your tough times!
Gone
I image once more
our silhouette against the sunset
at the edge of the ocean
the waves crashing on the
shore, a perfect illusion
I imagine once more
a moment so perfect
thought we’d build a bungalow, white and green there
With rows of hollyhocks, all sedate.
And you’d come out on the five-eighteen
And meet me down at the garden gate.
I imagine once more
our walk on the whistling shores
the voice of high-domed crab stilled
thought, you and I
With sweet simplicity all our aim,
We’d fare together to start
something great
I imagine once more
the bliss, the
sky as
the sun mottles the ground
you’re gone now and
I sit here
thinking about you and
all your kindness
longing to have you back
you haunt me to this day
Thanks for reading!
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Amazing collection of poems.
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Thanks a lot Rudra!😊
Glad that you liked it!
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They are really nice !!
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Thank you!😊
Sayeda ur from?
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Beautiful pieces!! Do keep it up!
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Glad 😊
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Your poems explained to me diffrent stages of life in particular of a friend. And also reminds me of the song you can count on me song by Bruno Mars. Your recent posts hold a mood on friendship isn’t it? Every poem of your explains beginning and middle phase and then the end and after. The beautiful feeling, the pain and overcoming it. I feel every line and relate to it.
Great poems. Write more poems!
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Wow! Thanks for this nice complement.
I feel accomplished 😄
You’re an aestheticspirit for sure…
The song you mentioned is so good! You made my day…and you definitely understand friendship!😊
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Your welcome!
I feel accomplished too by writing on your comment section🙂, well then maybe I have to say too that your aphorism is mesmerizing!!
I feel glad I did made your day but WordPress posts with incredible writers makes moments!
So do you! Have a great day ahead🙂
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You have written really nice poetry. Do keep on writing.
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Wow, really?Thanks for appreciating 😄
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You are welcome 🌸
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Those poems are really lovely. I especially like the one about friendship. Too many people have trouble writing about it because they blurred the lines with romantic love. Well done
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Thanks for your genuine opinion on my poem, I appreciate that!
Feeling really glad 😄
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You are welcome!
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This is a wonderful collection. I enjoyed reading them.
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Glad 😄
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[ “Summer” . . . Life gets better ]
Sounds like one joy
After another 🙂
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Beautiful!
Hi! I invite you all to get some dose of therapeutic poems and get inspired! Just click the link below:
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Thank you so much!
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😊😊😊
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Thank you 😊😊
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Beautiful!
Hi! I invite you all to get some dose of therapeutic poems and get inspired! Just click the link below:
https://poetrygallery650854510.wordpress.com/
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Thanks
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Really nice poems👍🏼🙂
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Thank you very much!
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These are REALLY good. I love them to death. Keep up this awesome work. You just earned yourself a new follower.
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Thanks for such a great compliment! 😊😊😊 Feeling glad
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Hello, I am a newbie to the blogging….Can you please check mine and also support with guidance!
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Thanks for stopping by.. I just checked out your work, and i must say it’s really good start. Keep going, you are really a talented writer
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Thanks a lot for the support ….It’s really encouraging!
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Omg! This collection is amazing.. you’re so so talented⭐️👍
Ps – I would really appreciate it if you’d check out my poems too. Your feedback will be highly valued🙂
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Happy that you think so. Thanks for reading and adding a valuable comment. I’ll check out your blog for sure 😊
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Wow!
Really great touching…😍
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Thank you😊
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That’s a good collection!
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Thank you😊😊
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Do check out my poems on my website when you get time!
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Yo👍
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FRIEND….. I loved that one!!
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Thank you Friend 😊
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I’m a new blogger but do read my first two poems on my website and give your suggestions when you’re free! 🙂
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I will check it out for sure😊😊😊
Thanks for visiting my blog…
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commendable poems 🙂
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Thanks a lot! 😄
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Loved ’em man! Had a good time reading
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Thanks Tupac
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Three poems together! 😻 I love all of them, my favourite one is the summer one, haha. Such beautiful images painted with words. This post made me realise your poems always had that magical effect. I’m so happy. 😹💙
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😀 Thank you so much. This is my best performing post so far 😅
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