I secretly sneaked into your closet
for a vowel, a consonant, a simile
for perfect syllables, apt images, to pen a poem
Ideas came overflowing
Words fell like cloudbursts
building lumps to phrases
Slowly pooling in my mind
Oceans and rivers began to form
surging and uprising
from finger tips to colossal domes
Flooding and drowning
everything in it’s wake
Then the touch of your curved lips
Unruffled my entire composition
It got molded deep
into the vault of your mouth
Now I can feel and hear my poem
In the sphere of your heaven
-It all looks so gorgeous.
Wow! The poem and analogy just flows so well. 😍😍😍 Especially the end. Didn’t expect that 💙💙💙
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Thank you, Sid😃
I gotta catch up with your work, it’s been a long time
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😁😁My pleasure 💙
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🌸🌻
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Its beautiful 🌺
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Thank you, Sarika😄
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You are most welcome 🌷
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🌸🌻
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Love is gorgeous. Love is poetry.🌸🌸
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❤️ True that!
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Wow!👏👏👏
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Thanks for reading, Navya😄
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😿😿😿
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why are you crying?
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Itni kharaab poem likhdi, aankh me aansu aagaye. 😭
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🌸🌻 Really?
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Yesss. 😞 You’re the worst poet everrrr huh. Please stop writing poems. 🙄
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Don’t humiliate me 😒
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Please delete your blog. It’s so uselessss. 😭
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Not gonna happen 😜
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Bada ro rahe the I’ll delete my blog, karke dikhaao na ab. 😒 I want to seeee.
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Aise kaise re?🤨
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Himmat hi nai tum mein. Zero ho zero. 😊 Also, give me credit for the photo. It’s mine. Bina permission kuch bhi lena is a crime. 😾
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Himmat bahut hai.
Hero hu Hero.
Photo meri hai, tumne churayi..meri permission ke bina😄
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Hero? Sapne me hoge hero. 😆😆
Hero jo bolte wo karte bhi hain. Tum toh ek promise bhi nai rakhte. ☺
Excuse me? Photo maine poochhke hi li thi. So, It’s meraaa. Case karungi tumpe.
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mein haar mantu hu🏳️
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Awww! So sweeet. Sorry boldo ab jaldi se. 😃
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!sorry😄
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Best Boyyy. 😻
(And worst boy tooo.) 😼👊
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I cannot say how much I loved this, start to finish. Bravo!
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That means a lot!
thanks 😊
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You’re welcome, I really loved it
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🌸🌻
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It’s Amazing..
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Thank you 😊❤️
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Beautiful lines 🙂
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thanks 😊
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Amazing man. This is the best thing I’ve read today ❤️
Keep writing 😇
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Thanks for reading bro😃
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so beautifully weaved words of love
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thank you 😊
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My pleasure
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Wow! It was awesome this is as beautiful as your profile pic
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Hehe!
Thank you Garima
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Most welcome mr. Abhishek Pathania
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Most welcome Abhishek
and don’t say thank you I don’t like to hear thanks from my friends we all are just cill and explore your creativity
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😄🤠
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Good work
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Thanks 😊
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Guys please visit my blog too, I have also written 3 to 4 poems and please like l am a new blogger
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Awesome poem. Love it.
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Thanks for reading 😄
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Hi, would love for you to check out my blog and let me know what you think ☺️
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Ya sure!
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A sad and true poem my brother. There is something about the way you put down your words. So magical. Thank you for sharing my bro
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thanks 😊
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🤗
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Beautiful, from closet to the sphere 👌
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Thank you Tushar😃😄
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A very uplifting poem
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thank u so much
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I loved it
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it is very good
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Simple outstanding and deeply profound😍
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thanks 😊
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Nice
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thank you
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Great thoughts
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thanks 😊
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Very well…
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thanks Gautam
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Beautiful analogy!
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thanks for reading, Diana😄
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Amazing Abhishek!
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thanks, Nisha!🙂
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Welcome. Kindly check my page and recent blog and share your views!
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Sure!
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This poem is just gorgeous… One of the most beautiful pieces I have read in a while💕💕
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Thank you, Gauri!
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Written very well
Checkout mine plz
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Thanks Jyoti! Sure I’ll checkout your blog
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♥
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Thanks
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Do check out my blogs as well 🙂
http://www.artikale.wordpress.com
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Sure
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Please post something here. 😾
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🏳️😁
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Ab kar rahe ho reply. 😒 Wow.
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Your poem is a treat! I loved reading it. Good luck😊
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Thanks a lot, Ramyani!
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Well written! Beautiful.
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Thanks, Mathew!
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Speechless!! Its too beautiful…..
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Thanks for the compliment 😊
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Really beautiful 🙂
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Thank you so much 😄
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I loved the way the poem is laid out and the ultimate result is beautiful and worthy
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Lisha, glad to see that you loved it! Thanks 🙂
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The ending had a great impact!
I totally felt so much emotion in this poem! You expressed it so well! ❤
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Thanks so much for your tender comment, Charis.
Deepely appericiated.
Warmest wishes, Abhishek.
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Radiant words, I’m enchanted.
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Thank you for your comment ❤️
Much appreciated. Take good care
– Abhishek
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Wonderful
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Thanks a lot, KRITIKA😄
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welcome 🙂
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Wow, great!
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Thanks a lot 😊
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Very nice spacing! I really like this style!
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Thanks for reading, Tim.
Much appreciated.
Take good care ✨👍
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You too. Thank you!
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The words are awesome.
The last words are ❤💙💙
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Oh thank you! Means a lot to me 🥰
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So beautiful.
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Thank you 😊❤️
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Enjoyed s
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Thank you 😊
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I love this- clever, thoughtful, lively – marvellous
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Beautiful
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thanks 😊
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